tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post4009676070989234679..comments2023-10-30T03:03:17.026-07:00Comments on RichCat 山羊居: Chicken Breeds 各色雞種RichCat山羊居http://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-39831623233056163242011-07-12T18:37:09.103-07:002011-07-12T18:37:09.103-07:00Dear lh:
If you are seriously do the drawing for ...Dear lh:<br /><br />If you are seriously do the drawing for my book, please email me: robynp2006@yahoo.com<br /><br />Looking forward to talking to you soonRichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-11532901598177378622011-07-12T17:49:33.098-07:002011-07-12T17:49:33.098-07:00Dear lh:
It's not only you never done such ki...Dear lh:<br /><br />It's not only you never done such kind of illustration, I haven't found any one did. That's why this book is unique.<br /><br />I also think about selling it to a good director or animation (cartoon) movie company after I published the book.<br /><br />Do you know sofa 創意文化 company in Taiwan who makes animation characters? Or 西基?<br /><br />You probably can be my partner since your English is pretty good. We should have no problem to communicate. What is the experience of drawing for books you have? Do you have a blog to show your drawing?<br /><br />Talk to you soon.RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-23865110505876824152011-07-12T17:44:05.506-07:002011-07-12T17:44:05.506-07:00Dear lh:
All 3 names are funny: Tom Sayer, Peter ...Dear lh:<br /><br />All 3 names are funny: Tom Sayer, Peter Pan and Michael Jackson. Too bad Michael Jackson is not alive, otherwise, I bet he would love to be the representative of my book :-)RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-78401853426090633872011-07-12T17:41:30.694-07:002011-07-12T17:41:30.694-07:00Dear lh:
You either can read my mind or you were ...Dear lh:<br /><br />You either can read my mind or you were here yesterday. I just tried to negotiate with a publisher that I will not take any % of royalty of the book. Instead, the publisher will donate the royalty to charity<br />that I choose in Taiwan (or Mainland china or USA).<br /><br />However, I can't find the publisher that agree to do this yet. Still trying.RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-6322205946532200282011-07-11T22:43:26.524-07:002011-07-11T22:43:26.524-07:00hi RichCat :
I meant the name has power of
lady g...hi RichCat :<br /><br />I meant the name has power of<br />lady gaga, somthing is attractive<br />to kids. I don't know, think about<br />it. Too bad it is he not she but<br />it is ok, by looking at Hairdresser's picture, to me he<br />must have the character which combine Tom Sayer, Peter Pan<br />and maybe dance like Michael<br />Jackson but the most important he must have a very tender heart.<br /><br />well the person I was going to <br />recommand is myself, I can draw<br />and I always like illustration<br />of children's book. But I never<br />done such kind of illustration,<br />if I am hired, I will do it<br />for free with condition of asking<br />you to donate money to charity<br />that I choose. I hope I am not<br />getting to far.<br /><br />regards, <br />lhlhhttp://l3444ung@aol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-8659953973134981002011-07-11T09:23:51.720-07:002011-07-11T09:23:51.720-07:00Dear lh:
Thank you very much for the great sugges...Dear lh:<br /><br />Thank you very much for the great suggestions.<br /><br />All pictures and videos in my blog are taken by myself here in my property. Those live stocks are raised by me too.<br /><br />I did think about the image of "lady gaga". However, I also consider the book may take one - three years to publish (hope not that long) and lady gaga may not the fashion by that time. Besides, I just found yesterday the chick was not "she" but "he" although I paid for a "her" price in April :-)<br /><br />You were right about more vivid and perky name will be funnier. I will keep searching and asking around.<br />I will fix the "financial crisis" to another "giggle" term. That is a good opinion. <br /><br />Yes, I will have lots of good illustration to go with my story. There will be about 1-2 pictures per page in the book. I take pictures for my animals everyday. This is just a draft. More pictures will be in my book.<br /><br />Thank you for recommending someone who can draw and love drawing. I would like to know the person if it is convenient to you (or him/her).<br /><br />You can leave the person's email here with a "single" comment and address the info is for me only. I will delete the comment before I publish other comments to my blog. <br /><br />This book is about chicken. I have other animals to write for the 2nd, 3rd and ...... books. They are under construction :-)<br /><br />All of my children books will be published with both Chinese and English.RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-24385124570035281552011-07-11T05:28:26.278-07:002011-07-11T05:28:26.278-07:00hi Richcat:
you have received some good critique, ...hi Richcat:<br />you have received some good critique, I am just going to <br />give a try. first of all, these<br />chickens are beautiful, are they<br />yours? I don't like the name Hairdresser, it is too normal,<br />her hair style is pretty punky, maybe something more vivid and perky? like lady gaga or ....<br />secondly,maybe make the story funnier, kids will giggle when they read them, and I am not sure your target readers will be on what age range? <br />your have talked about finicial<br />crisis?<br />at last, are you going to have lots of good illustration to go with your story? don't forget kids are very visual! I can recommand someone who can draw<br />and love drawing<br /><br />lhlhhttp://l3444ung@aol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-35204983022260336472011-07-03T11:06:34.158-07:002011-07-03T11:06:34.158-07:00Dear Bob:
Thank you for the critique. I personall...Dear Bob:<br /><br />Thank you for the critique. I personally believe to poop well is more important than that eat and sleep well. We may not die soon if we don't eat or sleep but we definitely will die in a big pain if we don't poop.<br /><br />I check everyone's poop everyday. Therefore, I know if they are healthy or not.<br /><br />Have a wonderful weekend.RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-35446958074304336942011-07-03T11:02:29.652-07:002011-07-03T11:02:29.652-07:00Dear Richard:
True. Education is mostly for grade...Dear Richard:<br /><br />True. Education is mostly for grade (score) but not life skill anymore. It is sad that young generation miss the opportunity to get close with nature that we can learn a lot from.RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-45041355300623656962011-07-03T11:00:17.621-07:002011-07-03T11:00:17.621-07:00Dear Robyn:
Thank you for the suggestion. Sex Lin...Dear Robyn:<br /><br />Thank you for the suggestion. Sex Link is the breed name. I am not sure if there is anything to do with sex. But I know that's how chicken (and us) get children to make the world beautiful :-)<br /><br />Have a wonderful July 4th holiday.RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-88351733751438114742011-06-22T15:24:10.134-07:002011-06-22T15:24:10.134-07:00Just a little interesting note about your vision. ...Just a little interesting note about your vision. We have been striving to learn about "being<br />prepared" for any disaster. <br /><br />If there was to be a major disaster one of the problems is that our society has moved away from our "grass roots" and too many young adults, etc., have no<br />knowledge of farm life...or how to care for animals or plant food crops. <br /><br />So the outreach you reference is a plus factor. Keep a positive thought!!!! <br /><br />RichardAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-37974203451127911872011-06-21T22:06:40.402-07:002011-06-21T22:06:40.402-07:00I read it quickly and I really liked it. I tend to...I read it quickly and I really liked it. I tend to avoid "sexy" things<br />because I don't think it is for children. Thanks so much for sharing your talents with others<br /><br />RobynAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-4972390311769925912011-06-21T17:59:28.963-07:002011-06-21T17:59:28.963-07:00the key "of" education should be the key...the key "of" education should be the key "to" education<br /><br />"Ya" is not a good world, should change it to "yes"<br /><br />No matter it is => no matter "if" it is<br /><br />the color => Their color<br /><br />"moose" => "hair gel"<br /><br />Chinese Confucius => delete Chinese<br /><br />eat/sleep, poop well => eat, sleep well. delete "poop". It is not a good word in children book and poop is not important,<br /><br />search food => search "for" food<br /><br />what are life skills => what are "these" life skills<br /><br />BobAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-45955319516002329292011-06-21T12:53:28.172-07:002011-06-21T12:53:28.172-07:00Very interesting...
I was raise on a farm. We had...Very interesting...<br /><br />I was raise on a farm. We had trees (prune and apricot), cow, horses, pigs, geese, ducks, chickens and rabbits and oh yes two cats. All the chickens were "reds" of some type (Rhode Island Reds) so we only had brown eggs, no whites. <br /><br />And of course someone had to clean up after them and every other month spray the chicken roosts. On the bottom part of the property, which was adjacent to the creek - sandy soil, we planted tomatoes. <br /><br />The summer harvest we would grab a salt shaker, lay down on the ground under the tomatoe's bushes with a knife, cut - salt and eat. We had to work but we also had fun. <br /><br />Thanks for the pics...<br /><br />RichardAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-72348626019310091362011-06-20T21:49:01.911-07:002011-06-20T21:49:01.911-07:00What a fascinating piece you have put together! T...What a fascinating piece you have put together! There were chickens there I never heard of, and I was raised on a farm with several varieties of chickens.<br /><br />I think it will hold the interest of children and be educational as well. I did find just a couple of places you might want to work over a little. When you were talking about the Pearl White Leghorn, there was a place where you said "supper" when it should have been "super."<br /><br />Further down you were talking about a chicken that lays eggs 365 days a year. That was followed by "X6." Do you mean the productive egg laying career of that chicken is six years long? Make that a little clearer, and I think the children can follow the math better.<br /><br />Other than that, I thought the article was clear, informative and should be great for kids.<br /><br />Thanks for letting me see it.<br /><br />PearlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-64477772087664982992011-06-20T20:06:32.164-07:002011-06-20T20:06:32.164-07:00我看了啊
根本不需要改
故事很棒很好笑呢
呵呵
特別是安德魯家兩個女兒的帽子..
Frog Wi...我看了啊<br />根本不需要改<br />故事很棒很好笑呢<br />呵呵<br /><br />特別是安德魯家兩個女兒的帽子..<br /><br />Frog WitchAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-57737650516930723972011-06-20T16:02:19.118-07:002011-06-20T16:02:19.118-07:00Dear Sam:
I write my blog in Chinese and English....Dear Sam:<br /><br />I write my blog in Chinese and English. My target audience is children. May I ask you to forward the link to your friends who have children? I like to have their critique and feedback. Thanks.RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-22152729295577118012011-06-20T16:00:08.019-07:002011-06-20T16:00:08.019-07:00Critique from Sam:
It looks good, who is your tar...Critique from Sam:<br /><br />It looks good, who is your target audience? Why are there characters<br />on the page (foreign exchange program?) I thought it was pretty cute though.RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-67962746897876653502011-06-20T15:59:13.511-07:002011-06-20T15:59:13.511-07:00Dear Mary:
Thank you sharing it to your grand dau...Dear Mary:<br /><br />Thank you sharing it to your grand daughter. She is about 2 years old, isn't she? Please let me know if she has any question about the story. I like to have her feedback. Does she laugh when you read it to her?RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-56387146783973592912011-06-20T15:57:41.940-07:002011-06-20T15:57:41.940-07:00Critique from Mary:
Very good! I'll forward ...Critique from Mary:<br /><br />Very good! I'll forward it to my iPhone email and share it with my grand daughter this weekend. Thank you. Love, MaryRichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-35912733844097062072011-06-20T15:56:36.991-07:002011-06-20T15:56:36.991-07:00critique from Cecilia:
I really enjoyed it. It is...critique from Cecilia:<br /><br />I really enjoyed it. It is very interesting. This should be a book!! Great workRichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388745030155411402.post-52840510077235503622011-06-19T21:47:14.029-07:002011-06-19T21:47:14.029-07:00a critique from Shannon:
What a creative and educ...a critique from Shannon:<br /><br />What a creative and educational piece of work, good job! <br /><br />The only spelling error was when you are talking about "Super Star" you misspelled shinny (it should be shiny), otherwise very well done.RichCat山羊居https://www.blogger.com/profile/09770789855043866706noreply@blogger.com